The first annotation is not quite researched based but more testimonial. Earlier this year a woman regrew a fingertip through the help of stem cells. Though they did not call it stems cells, due to the fact that it is associated negatively to the human mind, it was regenerative medicine. With that being a step towards the betterment of this science I feel it is only time until we can regrow organs.
The second annotation deals with the facts of stem cells and how they work. To begin the stem cell is an unspecialized cell that has the capability to renew until it is no longer needed. It also has the ability to become almost any type of cell from organ to tissue based. They only need a living host to do their magical work.
Both of these sources sound very interesting, and I think they will really add to your paper’s effectiveness. The first one can maybe be the required web source which doesn’t really need to be research based. I think that this will be a very good source to include because it shows a very positive outlook on what you are trying to achieve. The second one will definitely be helpful because it provides valuable background information that your readers can learn from. Overall, I believe that these will provide very valuable information for your paper, but I would add a little more length to your description on both.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your articles. The first thing that I would like to say is that the summaries and assessments of the article seem very well written. One thing that I would say needs to be added are your citations they are a big part of this. The next thing is that on your source you said that it was more of a testimony. If it is not a regular source you should make sure that the person is credible and that they know what they are talking about. You should also make sure that the topic because you said it was not said specifically is actually your topic.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the articles I thought that they will benefit your paper as they are both oriented in the direction of your original ten thousand solutions idea. It looks as though you have well wrapped up what you will be using to finalize the paper and will be well written. Above someone mentions the use of situations, although they are needed, they were not for this assignment so I feel as though you are fine as long as you cite them in the final version of your paper. that was the only concern I had I look forward to reading the full essay when completed.
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